Look at the transitions between paragraphs or between section. How does he or she make these transitions? What effect do they have on the forward momentum of the piece?
In this article, the author told us her unnatural experiences by chronological. She used the time of each issue happened to connect each section. She used the terms like "then","continued" apply for the order of issues happened. This way made her article more logical.
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This article is wrote by reminiscent way. The author first recalled the experiment in her school life, and then wrote her memory of driving a car around the Salt Lake. Next, she remembered two things in her child life: one is having a worship out of chapel and another is have a trip to Bird Refuge. At last, she recalled the sad facts that her family females' cancer after the nuclear tests in Utah.
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